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A Wolfy Situation (on figment as well)
 
G-MAN
Posted: 09 May 2012 05:45 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 16 ]
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thnx :)

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BLOOD & MAGIG is all that I READ, all that I DRINK and all that I PRACTICE
Everyone’s destiny is wrote in a big story book, no matter how strong a person is pages CANNOT be torn from it…

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Ebony Raven
Posted: 10 May 2012 03:04 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 17 ]
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No problem :P

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Who will care if I’m not here?
If suddenly I disappeared?
No one’s gonna’ notice it at all,
Dying flowers in my hand,
I’m vanishing from where I stand,
It isn’t yet too late to get the truth.

My soul is dark, I cease the night,
But your the angel that show me the light.
And I tried to be strong,
But I still long for you.

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dannii
Posted: 10 May 2012 04:34 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 18 ]
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Its good,kinda gory but yanno.Its good :p.

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Enjoy the rollercoaster that is life - Zayn Malik <3

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G-MAN
Posted: 10 May 2012 04:35 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 19 ]
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LOL thnx Dannii

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Everyone’s destiny is wrote in a big story book, no matter how strong a person is pages CANNOT be torn from it…

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G-MAN
Posted: 15 May 2012 03:36 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 20 ]
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Here’s a preview for the final one. I’ve finished number 2 but just editing it.
Wolfy Situation: Shadows of the Burnt.


I’m sitting down, my stomach is losing a lot of blood. (you’ll find out why in number 2) I’m holding a bunch of guts, sucking out the slimy juices. I clutch my jaws around it and the soft skin surrounding it tears apart. All the gooey liquid is released and I dive onto it. I slurp it up. I look at the carcass of the horse that I have just slaughtered, tear the head off and dive my hand down the neck and reach for its heart…

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BLOOD & MAGIG is all that I READ, all that I DRINK and all that I PRACTICE
Everyone’s destiny is wrote in a big story book, no matter how strong a person is pages CANNOT be torn from it…

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Ebony Raven
Posted: 15 May 2012 03:44 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 21 ]
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Nasty… Lol, but amazing :P

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Who will care if I’m not here?
If suddenly I disappeared?
No one’s gonna’ notice it at all,
Dying flowers in my hand,
I’m vanishing from where I stand,
It isn’t yet too late to get the truth.

My soul is dark, I cease the night,
But your the angel that show me the light.
And I tried to be strong,
But I still long for you.

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BeckieWillBiteYou
Posted: 15 May 2012 09:31 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 22 ]
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ahaha cool G-MAN!! :D

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I’ve become so numb, I can’t feel you there
Become so tired, so much more aware
I’m becoming this, all I want to do
Is be more like me and be less like you
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Smiling is the best mask.
The world is full of happiness that I have never known.
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Speak with your tongue tied,
I know that you’re tired
But I just want to know,
Where you want to go,
I may be sad, But I’m not weak,
This situation is bleak
And your puffy eyes never lie,
Your tears come from inside.

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G-MAN
Posted: 16 May 2012 06:40 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 23 ]
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:D THNX!!!!

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Everyone’s destiny is wrote in a big story book, no matter how strong a person is pages CANNOT be torn from it…

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Ebony Raven
Posted: 16 May 2012 06:40 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 24 ]
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Np :P

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Who will care if I’m not here?
If suddenly I disappeared?
No one’s gonna’ notice it at all,
Dying flowers in my hand,
I’m vanishing from where I stand,
It isn’t yet too late to get the truth.

My soul is dark, I cease the night,
But your the angel that show me the light.
And I tried to be strong,
But I still long for you.

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BeckieWillBiteYou
Posted: 16 May 2012 06:47 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 25 ]
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It’s OK G-MAN :)

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I’ve become so numb, I can’t feel you there
Become so tired, so much more aware
I’m becoming this, all I want to do
Is be more like me and be less like you
—————-
Smiling is the best mask.
The world is full of happiness that I have never known.
—————
Speak with your tongue tied,
I know that you’re tired
But I just want to know,
Where you want to go,
I may be sad, But I’m not weak,
This situation is bleak
And your puffy eyes never lie,
Your tears come from inside.

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G-MAN
Posted: 05 June 2012 09:43 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 26 ]
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lol. can someone give me a honest review?

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BLOOD & MAGIG is all that I READ, all that I DRINK and all that I PRACTICE
Everyone’s destiny is wrote in a big story book, no matter how strong a person is pages CANNOT be torn from it…

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Darren Shanster
Posted: 06 June 2012 02:07 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 27 ]
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K! :P
I really like it, honest, but you could’ve worded a couple thing differently, and used ‘I’ a little less; really minor things, that don’t matter a whole lot, but I still love it, and would definately buy it in a store if it was published ;)

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A book is your best friend when everyone else hates you.
I should never have cared. But I did care. I cared a lot. And I still freaking care.
Saying someone can’t be sad, because someone else may have it worse, is like saying someone can’t be happy, because someone may have it better.
Strong enough to walk away. Broken enough to look back.
I’m not mad at you. I’m just done with you.
The hardest part of letting go is realizing the other person already has.

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