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A Wolfy Situation (on figment as well)
 
G-MAN
Posted: 09 May 2012 04:45 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 16 ]
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thnx :)

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BLOOD & MAGIG is all that I READ, all that I DRINK and all that I PRACTICE
Everyone’s destiny is wrote in a big story book, no matter how strong a person is pages CANNOT be torn from it…

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Inimeitiel Calenmiriel
Posted: 10 May 2012 02:04 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 17 ]
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No problem :P

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So we grew up believing no one
Would ever fall in love with us,
That we’d be lonely forever,
That we’d never meet someone,
To make us feel like the sun
Was something they built for us
In their tool shed.

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dannii
Posted: 10 May 2012 03:34 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 18 ]
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Its good,kinda gory but yanno.Its good :p.

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Enjoy the rollercoaster that is life - Zayn Malik <3

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G-MAN
Posted: 10 May 2012 03:35 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 19 ]
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LOL thnx Dannii

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G-MAN
Posted: 15 May 2012 02:36 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 20 ]
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Here’s a preview for the final one. I’ve finished number 2 but just editing it.
Wolfy Situation: Shadows of the Burnt.


I’m sitting down, my stomach is losing a lot of blood. (you’ll find out why in number 2) I’m holding a bunch of guts, sucking out the slimy juices. I clutch my jaws around it and the soft skin surrounding it tears apart. All the gooey liquid is released and I dive onto it. I slurp it up. I look at the carcass of the horse that I have just slaughtered, tear the head off and dive my hand down the neck and reach for its heart…

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BLOOD & MAGIG is all that I READ, all that I DRINK and all that I PRACTICE
Everyone’s destiny is wrote in a big story book, no matter how strong a person is pages CANNOT be torn from it…

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Inimeitiel Calenmiriel
Posted: 15 May 2012 02:44 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 21 ]
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Nasty… Lol, but amazing :P

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So we grew up believing no one
Would ever fall in love with us,
That we’d be lonely forever,
That we’d never meet someone,
To make us feel like the sun
Was something they built for us
In their tool shed.

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BeckieWillBiteYou
Posted: 15 May 2012 08:31 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 22 ]
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ahaha cool G-MAN!! :D

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No, don’t
Leave me to die here,
Help me survive here.
Alone, don’t
Surrender, surrender.
Oh.
Fly over me evil angel.
Why can’t I breathe evil angel?

I am Divergent.

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G-MAN
Posted: 16 May 2012 05:40 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 23 ]
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:D THNX!!!!

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Everyone’s destiny is wrote in a big story book, no matter how strong a person is pages CANNOT be torn from it…

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Inimeitiel Calenmiriel
Posted: 16 May 2012 05:40 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 24 ]
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Np :P

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So we grew up believing no one
Would ever fall in love with us,
That we’d be lonely forever,
That we’d never meet someone,
To make us feel like the sun
Was something they built for us
In their tool shed.

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BeckieWillBiteYou
Posted: 16 May 2012 05:47 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 25 ]
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It’s OK G-MAN :)

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No, don’t
Leave me to die here,
Help me survive here.
Alone, don’t
Surrender, surrender.
Oh.
Fly over me evil angel.
Why can’t I breathe evil angel?

I am Divergent.

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G-MAN
Posted: 05 June 2012 08:43 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 26 ]
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lol. can someone give me a honest review?

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BLOOD & MAGIG is all that I READ, all that I DRINK and all that I PRACTICE
Everyone’s destiny is wrote in a big story book, no matter how strong a person is pages CANNOT be torn from it…

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SquidgyTheTurtle
Posted: 06 June 2012 01:07 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 27 ]
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K! :P
I really like it, honest, but you could’ve worded a couple thing differently, and used ‘I’ a little less; really minor things, that don’t matter a whole lot, but I still love it, and would definately buy it in a store if it was published ;)

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Don’t hate your body or hate yourself,
embrace yourself and love yourself,
because you’re stuck with that body for the rest of your life,
and if you hate yourself your entire life,
you’re going to hate your entire life.
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“It’s good to be strange, normalness leads to sadness”

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